Post by account_disabled on Feb 18, 2024 22:47:11 GMT -5
There is content and it’s actually pretty well written. That being said when I clicked on one of their banners I was brought to the page above which is really lacking. 1. Where is the content? The headline is trying to be too cute. What does this product do? This page is in desperate need of some content to let visitors know what they can do with the product. What are the “intuitive tools” that will optimize my code? How are you optimizing my code? Are you speeding it up? Are you making it easier to read? Be explicit with your benefits.
2. T-Shirts or software? What’s with the t-shirt? Am I buying Buy TG Database clothing? It seems to have nothing to do with anything. Lose it. 3. I’m flush with call-to-actions! I’m not sure that you need to have 4 call to actions on this page. All of the content could be summarized above the fold and one call to action could be used. Better yet, just summarize the information and provide a form to create your account right on the landing page. Remember to keep things simple.
7. Participaction Participaction Landing Page This is a splash page that is stuck in a time long past. Splash pages are horrible for usability. Don’t use them. 1. Why am I here? I would love to see the bounce rate on this splash page, I bet it’s huge. I just clicked a link about getting my kid to be more active and I land on this page. “Let’s get moving” doesn’t explain what I’m choosing… even if this page were changed to “English” and “Français” it would perform better.
2. T-Shirts or software? What’s with the t-shirt? Am I buying Buy TG Database clothing? It seems to have nothing to do with anything. Lose it. 3. I’m flush with call-to-actions! I’m not sure that you need to have 4 call to actions on this page. All of the content could be summarized above the fold and one call to action could be used. Better yet, just summarize the information and provide a form to create your account right on the landing page. Remember to keep things simple.
7. Participaction Participaction Landing Page This is a splash page that is stuck in a time long past. Splash pages are horrible for usability. Don’t use them. 1. Why am I here? I would love to see the bounce rate on this splash page, I bet it’s huge. I just clicked a link about getting my kid to be more active and I land on this page. “Let’s get moving” doesn’t explain what I’m choosing… even if this page were changed to “English” and “Français” it would perform better.